I think the finished piece is great; I think this is a topic glazed over often and I'm glad of the multitude of potential topics out there, you picked this one. My only concern is the font size. I know you're going subtle in a way to have the audience really think on the message, but I still feel the text should stand out more. It's the message, it can be subtle, but still more a focus.
I think the finished piece is great; I think this is a topic glazed over often and I'm glad of the multitude of potential topics out there, you picked this one. My only concern is the font size. I know you're going subtle in a way to have the audience really think on the message, but I still feel the text should stand out more. It's the message, it can be subtle, but still more a focus.
ReplyDeleteI like the revisions. It makes a bolder statement and the message is clear. Nice job.
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